Tuesday, February 24, 2009

चौकड़ी

I was trying to experiment with style of poems. It came in my mind to design 4 liner poem, where the first three lines will define same object through different subjects (Science, Arts, Maths..). The last one will be philosophical end to these. I thought to call it "चौकड़ी".

example - चाँद

खरबों किलोमीटर दूर होगा कोई मुझसे,
मेरे बेटे के खिलोने जैसा दिखता है वो,
फिर भी पूजती हूँ उसे, नत् होती हूँ,

खुद से ऊपर बैठा हर कोई बड़ा ही होता है.

By- वर्तिका

Wallet

So many murders for leather to preserve fate,

Handy, trendy, branded, I prefer it for my date,

My wallet is wet in tears, have recession in its eyes,


We shrink our life as we grow up in size.




Try your hands....

5 comments:

VaRtIkA said...

hey rahul! this proves how spontaneous u r...wen some1 can invent a new style of writing in a few second thn i wonder wat all you can do...

keep inventing...and hope to c some gr8 ones frm u too.... :)

Ankit Chugh said...

Good one buddy... I am looking forward to more interesting "chaukadis"

sajjan said...

kavi(Raj)...

scribbling romantic lines..
innovating style refines..
some for money some for fame..

these are the people who will inspire the country's lifelines..

Deepak Agarwal said...

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ofcourse because of your poem

Abhijit said...

sapne neend mein aane waale anjaane khayal
ya mere antarman ke chupe huye sawaal
aankhon ke parde par chalti tasverein
ya khaalipan ke canvas par dhundli umeed ki lakiren

इतने संस्कार का अचार डालोगे क्या?

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