Sunday, March 09, 2008

Was that OUR REVOLUTION?

Was that OUR REVOLUTION?

Rhyme…Rhyme…Rhyme.
You force me every time,
Is it not a crime?
Bargaining thoughts to rhyme,
And, branding the poem to be sublime.

The funniest of all the fun,
We all are heading some run,
Blindly following some Sun,
Announcing “I had all the fun”,
Eagerly waiting to hear “Well done”

We are dragged to fight some war,
Are convinced to help as far,
We bleed and get some scar;
Satisfied and proud,
We boast, blabber and declare ourselves a star.

The formula I was told
To succeed, being young or old,
Was to rhyme, rhyme and rhyme,
Each and every time.

6 comments:

abhishek modi said...

well the non-thinkers before action should take a mesage from this....dont follow the sun... the shortness made it sweet.. gd work

shikha said...

actually few people do such type of actions for which they have no ryhme...not at all even..this message is insisting me to think about the reason..behind every work of mine..thanks to make me think..good approach!!

abhilash said...

Well rittn nag....Ur works r gettin intense and touching sensitive issues...Good good.....Having the natural gift and the balls of penning down thoughts beautifully, I suggest U read more and more...so that ur perspetives get even wider......
The IT junta expects some comedy poems from its eternal Pandu....Keep that in mind, before U leave IT....

amaresh's oeuvre said...

NICE LITTLE EYE OPENER...HOPE THE NEEDY READS IT!!!

Amrit Verma said...

Now this is what you should be...!!!
Nice work.

Abhilasha said...

Beautifully rhymed to revolt the rhymes, Nicely composed rebelling the things reinforced.
The way its written intensifies the msg many a times.

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